1st of all no one knows your frustration more than me. I have done the chapter six times and every time have been instructed that it is waaaaay to violent and grusome as well as sick and disturbing. I have written it how I feel the character should be and different people who have looked at it do not agree. I am writing it over one last time and then saying screw it if they don't like it and post it anyway. I don't want to make people sick or ill from the chapter. I have a very wicked evil mind and wanted Embry to be more disturbed than my betas liked. I will get it out and I know saying please be patient is asking a lot right now, but I can't post an unfinished chapter. :-(
I have been told by a friend I let read it
"OMG that is just sick...he's worse than a serial killer and I can't stand to continue reading"
I will finish it shortly and send it to my beta Mandee and hopefully she will approve then I will post i promise!
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